When I'm gone one day

Crystal lynn klosski 1982 (Oak Gill)



When I'm gone,one day,
Don't bury me,
Upon this cold hard ground.,
Where pain is all food and sight is no longer seen and purpose is no longer found.

Don't let me suffer no more nor
Sufficate in  vain,
And never forget the silence in between my name.

When I'm gone,one day
Just know that I will be around.
Because there ain't no grave,
That's gonna hold me down.

From dust we we're created,
And from dust we will return.
Put your faith on top ,
And life's lesson you will learn.

When I'm gone,one day
Please don't think I'm dead.
Because when I'm gone ,
Its all in your head.

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Submitted by klosskicrystal on January 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axbb xxx Abxx xcxc Adxd
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 582
Words 134
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 4

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