You promised you'd never leave me
You promised you’d never leave
By Bella Sullivan
My heart darkens to the voice I hear no more
If I only knew how I could see
This would be our last goodbye
I miss you’re voice over the phone
How you talked thanking the days
The awkward silence after there were no words left to say
But of course you promised you’ll never leave
You said you’d love me until the ends of earth
I believed you
But I still knew or love wouldn’t last long
That you would still leave me no matter what i’d do
But yet im sure you do too
Im sure you knew,
That you would still leave me
After you promised you’ll never do
And you promised it was true.
About this poem
This poem is about my ex. we were dating for almost 2 months. she said that she loves me and would never ever leave me. I honestly knew it wasn't true. but I still stayed. I have never wrote my own poetry before.
Written on May 23, 2023
Submitted by isabelles.55999 on May 23, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AX XBXXXX AXCXCCC BCC |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 648 |
Words | 131 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 6, 7, 3 |
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