The Cycles of Choice: A Poem on Life's Pathways



Sometimes a fleeting pleasure seems to be a lasting treasure.
Sometimes what seems to fill the void is a temporary toy.
When it breaks,
you feel the ache & then you seek another fake.
You don't realize when mindless craving becomes enslaving & ruins the life in short term.

Sometimes a quick satisfaction seems to be a real attraction.
Sometimes what seems to make you smile is a cheap and easy style.
When it fades,
you feel betrayed & then you trade your self-esteem.
You don't realize when shallow living becomes unforgiving & damages the life in mid term.

Sometimes a hasty indulgence seems to be a wise prudence.
Sometimes what seems to soothe your pain is a false and fleeting gain.
When it ends,
you lose your friends & then you spend your days alone.
You don't realize when reckless spending becomes offending & hurts the life in long term.

Sometimes a rash decision seems to be a clear vision.
Sometimes what seems to be the best is a rash and unwise test.
When it fails,
you face the trails & then you wail your fate away.
You don't realize when impulsive choosing becomes losing & harms the life in short term.

Sometimes a lazy habit seems to be a cozy fit.
Sometimes what seems to ease your stress is a dull and mindless mess.
When it bores,
you close the doors & then you snore your life away.
You don't realize when passive coping becomes moping & wastes the life in mid term.

Sometimes an angry reaction seems to be a strong action.
Sometimes what seems to give you power is a bitter and sour shower.
When it hurts,
you lose your shirts & then you curse your luck away.
You don't realize when aggressive venting becomes resenting & breaks the life in long term.

Sometimes a greedy ambition seems to be a noble mission.
Sometimes what seems to make you rich is a dark and dirty ditch.
When it traps,
you lose your maps & then you lapse into despair.
You don't realize when selfish striving becomes conniving & spoils the life in short term.

Sometimes a cunning deception seems to be a smart perception.
Sometimes what seems to get you ahead is a lie and a cheat instead.
When it's caught,
you face the draught & then you ought to pay the price.
You don't realize when dishonest winning becomes sinning & taints the life in mid term.

Sometimes a vain obsession seems to be a valid expression.
Sometimes what seems to boost your ego is a hollow and shallow show.
When it's gone,
you feel the scorn & then you mourn your loss of face.
You don't realize when narcissistic flaunting becomes haunting & scars the life in long term.

Sometimes a wise reflection seems to be a dull rejection.
Sometimes what seems to hold you back is a true and honest track.
When it's done,
you see the sun & then you run towards the light.
You realize when mindful choosing becomes improving & heals the life in short term.

About this poem

This poem explores the dichotomy between fleeting pleasures and lasting wisdom. It highlights the human tendency to chase temporary, superficial gratifications that can ultimately lead to regret and long-term suffering. Each stanza presents a scenario where impulsive choices or behaviors seem alluring but ultimately prove detrimental. The poem concludes with the idea that true growth and fulfillment come from mindful decision-making and self-reflection. It's a poignant reminder of the importance of considering the long-term consequences of our actions and the value of wisdom over instant gratification.  

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Written on June 23, 2010

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on October 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXB CXXXB XXXXB CXXDB XXXDB CAXDB CXXXB CXXXB CXXXB CXCXB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 2,840
Words 574
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

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