Who's Adventure Was It?



What a waste of time this has been
To love such a woman, want a new life to begin
I loved her so much, and now I am sad
We're parting our ways, and she is glad
We had problems, as so many do
If you will not discuss them, the love is not true
I have caused problems, I admit this
But loves not a game, of just hit or miss
I've just been a game, for her to play
I'll not love another, not like this no way
I suppose my love was a piece of the game
She never did truly love me the same
An Adventure is what I was to this one
I hope she enjoyed it, and had lots of fun
To me it was real, I wanted her for life
I truly wanted her, to be my wife
I'd give my life, to be with this girl
I suppose I was a game, and she gave me whirl
My heart is in pieces, and will never mend
I will always love her, and need her, till my end
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Submitted on May 10, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 798
Words 185
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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