Analysis of Two Young Devotional Boys



Two young boys,
seemingly at same age,
work since morning to evening,
even under the sun rage!

They work and work
never deny any!
They work in silent
even on a day of rainy!

I don't know if they go to temple
to worship deities
but I know
they worship their duties.

When people are afraid
and confined in rooms.
They are sweeping dust
with their brooms!

When panic people go out
with masks.
The boys using their scythe
only to cut grasses!

I behold
and meditate,
neither science nor medicines,
only God is piloting their fate.


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD XXXX XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 111 100111 1110110 1010011 1101 100110 11010 10101110 111111110 110100 111 110110 110101 00101 11101 111 1101011 11 011011 101110 101 010 10101100 101110011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 532
Words 117
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by swarup on November 10, 2021

Modified by swarup on November 10, 2021

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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