Analysis of Love To Free Sunken Dirt



The downy flakes were covering
the tops of the trees.
The freezed ice
almost reached to my knees.

I was standing
and hovering my glorified past
which became also cool,freezed
and didn't long last.

I knew 'tomorrow' would be the harbinger
of my new hope.
Stripe of Sunlight
would free the drooping groove.

I wanted love should penetrate
in my heart
and melted the freezed gloom
and sunken dirt.

The bent head of the trees
would be erect again
and my heavy heart would be
free from sour of disdain.


Scheme ABXB ACCC XXXX XXXX BXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 01010100 01101 011 11111 1110 01001101 101101 01011 1101110100 1111 111 110101 1101110 011 010011 0101 011101 110101 0110111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 502
Words 103
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by swarup on May 07, 2022

Modified by swarup on May 08, 2022

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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