Analysis of The Syrian and Family Beloved



Met him after sundown
His smoke break
Back of our building
Cool and quiet
One mourning dove
Serenading from lamp post
On the street.

A Syrian, here eleven years
Shy about his English usage
Studying at an ESL group.
Making progress but
Not fast enough, he says.
I commend him on his accomplishment.

Up careens a current
Model of Honda.
Son inside and smiling.
Basket of fruit for Dad.
And cherry tomatoes.
Out of the building burst
Two daughters tall
Slim and beautiful.
Long dark hair, shining.
Young twenties and laughing.
Dad’s pride and joy.
Fully assimilated and proud.
Proud of Papa.

He risked so much
Left all behind.
Watched the ensuing broadcast horrors
From a thankful distance.


Scheme XXABXXX XXXBXC CDAXXXXXAAXXD XXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 11101 111 111010 1010 1101 010111 101 010010101 10111010 1001111 1011 110111 1011110100 101010 10110 101010 101111 010010 110101 1101 10100 11110 110010 1101 10010001 1110 1111 1101 10100110 101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 692
Words 136
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 13, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on July 25, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on July 25, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on July 25, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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