Analysis of DEEP POINT



Woe to him who does not even know himself

to defiantly refuse,

or die simply and quietly

- and can't be silent,

he tolerated listening in silence with his mouth closed.

He cannot escape his selfish, judgmental fate:

to a love that is undying even from certainty,

nor to a tropical paradise,

from whom worthy retribution cannot be torn apart

his promise, which is then fulfilled with interest.

A worm gnaws at his brainwashed brain and heart.

A dried thorn remained

also the misunderstood declaration of loyalty.

- You don't need a hand, a hug, or comfort

- woe to the one who needs to be alone

to bear the cross he endured.

He can't be happy,

agreement, relationship harmony;

an irritable temper gathers in his soul,

lava rage all the way

to the look that cuts like a scalpel

- from there he crawls under me,

gradually getting heavier

either a heavy concrete block or a rock ridge.

They flap over him insufficiently,

like half-blind moles towards the groping light.

A brainwashed marionette is your newest acquaintance.

Absence gnaws and then consumes you.

There can be no peace here or there.

A single star-soul still shines within

and you can hardly find a worthy partner,

so they can understand your hellish ordeal.

Movements, gazes sink,

they will sink in if you let them.

His two angelic arms wave like traitors in the wind.

Earthworms and creepers are now crawling on it,

who lightly gave up his apostate dreams.

They roll like a wheel in the manner of Sisyphus

the aggravating burdens of their compromise to the invaders.

Swims - if necessary - even against the tide,

a haughty, overbearing, proud man dedicatedly.

For straw puppets that can be pulled on a string

it never grows laurels nowadays.

Alas for that

who cannot sell himself bribably!


Scheme X A B X X X B X C X C X B X X X B B X X X B D X B X X X X X D X X X X X X A X X B X X X B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (22%)
Metre 11111110101 1010001 11100100 01110 11001000101111 110011100101 10111010101100 11010010 1110010101101 11011101110 011111101 01101 1000010101100 1110101110 1101111101 1101101 11110 010010100 110001010011 101101 101111010 1111101 100010100 100100111011 111010100 1111010101 0111110010 10101011 11111111 010111101 01110101010 1110111001 10101 11101111 111011110001 101111011 1101110101 11101001011 010010111010010 11100100101 0101010111 11101111101 11011010 0111 1101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,820
Words 391
Sentences 18
Stanzas 45
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on November 25, 2023

Submitted by oasev on November 24, 2023

1:58 min read
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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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