Analysis of The Garden of Eden.



The Garden of Eden.

When I look at you, I can see your beauty and smell the scent of your sweet lips it does not compare to anything in the sky or air. I love you and want to kiss them soft, sweet lips. And when I look at you, I feel the golden barley and wheat as they blow in the cool summer breeze. You are the forbidden fruit like the apple I can taste but can't pick. If I did, I would love you even more than the day before. I can see the clouds are a shade of gray as they float by. I can see a storm brewing, and it makes me want to cry. But I know it's all in vain; I can feel the rain. What should I do, or what can I do? I'm falling in love with you and you are the apple of my eye. So I sit here and cry.


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Characters 718
Words 162
Sentences 13
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 268
Words per line (avg) 80
Letters per stanza (avg) 268
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

This poem is about a beautiful girl I fell in love with but I know I can never have her or she would never want me.

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Written on March 04, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 04, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on March 04, 2024

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