Analysis of Elusive Hope



sharp whine,
a razor's edge,
carves through flesh,
a crimson vow.

syringe's needle,
a cold cross,
dulls the pain,
a temporary peace.

flickers of light,
amidst the void,
hope's echo,
in despair's home.

but darkness lingers,
a heavy cloud,
enfolding dreams,
a haunting power.

sonic echoes,
a deathly ringing,
or whispers of wishes,
a fragile rune?

in this suite
of pain,
the answer lives,
an pending desist.


Scheme XXXX XXAX XXXX XXXX XXXX XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11 0101 111 0101 110 011 101 01001 1011 0101 110 011 11010 0101 11 01010 1010 01010 110110 0101 011 11 0101 11001
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 421
Words 94
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

This poem explores themes of self-harm, addiction, and the struggle for hope in the face of despair.

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Written on April 06, 2024

Submitted by JoeStrickland on April 06, 2024

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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