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Real me

Kevinp7

Where is my sight obviously I'm blind Where is my touch I cannot feel !! where are all my sences? I have lost them...they are gone: drowning I the ocean!! I seek for peace so deeply it hurts I look for it on love...love burns it stings it frightens:it killz my hurt swells:it lives vicariously through me have I lost that to?? Why should I care : I'm  wandering through life senseless everything is false can you see the real me? Give me security something tangible: and seal it with a kiss to bring me to my sences where I shall find peace..
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Written on November 15, 2021

Submitted by kevinp.75751 on November 15, 2021

Modified by kevinp.75751 on November 16, 2021

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Scheme A
Characters 542
Words 105
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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    Samhain
    Meant to give this poem 5 stars but it stopped after clicking on the first star. Deep insightful poem
    LikeReply2 years ago

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