Hidden pain
Tears dropping down my cheeks
Dreaming of the pain so deep
my mind cry's in my sleep
wailing through the dreams of flowers
blossoming and the sun glooming
summer is near but when I awake
I'm covered in sweat and tears
why so much pain that gathers up in my mind
my mind fights for a positive life
where was the negative from
I couldn't sleep
what was bothering me and building up in me
my mind wondered
my heart whimpered
my eye's widened
I had a thought to myself and it was my mom
About this poem
It's about my mom leaving me when me and my brothers were younger
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Written on March 27, 2015
Submitted by keyaearth28 on July 23, 2022
Modified on April 15, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABBCDDEFGHBIJFKL |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 485 |
Words | 97 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 16 |
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