What could have been better
Sugyan raut 2003 (Nepal)
I can count on to thousands words
And arrange it together to made what I've for you
I can write a hundred letters
And ask you to read it again and again
I'm not a painter
If I were, then I could have drawn you over again and again
Till the last ripple of pen got empty
I'm not an aesthete
If I were, then I could have given all of my heart to every piece of the paper
Written about you
I know I'm not perfect
But I could have done every impossible to make you feel warm ni cold
No more pain and Exhaustion
Happy whenever you're low
Tore my heart out infront of you
Treat you decently
Could have petrol my heart
Just to get fired by you
Again and again
Every time
Could have stopped walking
Just to sit beside you
Could have stop breathing
Just to listen your heart pumping
Looked over you again and again
Even if every beautiful things around world is kept beside you
I'm not a pilot
But I can make you feel like flying
Removing all of yours difficulties
Insecurity and don't ever stop adoring you for what you're.
About this poem
I wrote this remembering her who eventually broke up with me and it's almost 3 years and i still can't get over of her
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Written on August 09, 2021
Submitted by sugyanraut04 on September 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | X A X B C B D X C A X X X X A D X A B E A E E B A X E X X |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,043 |
Words | 228 |
Stanzas | 29 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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