When I was here!



When I was here!
you would stare...
and wanted to be near me:

When I was here!
you dared to talk to thee,
To set your mind free..
telling me that,
I was going fall in love with you?!

When I was here!
You tried to spit game,
and lost it all to shame...

When I was here!
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Written on October 19, 2022

Submitted on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axb Abbxx Acc A
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 272
Words 72
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 3, 1

Melissa Veronica Maldonado

I am a single 43 yr old, woman that likes to write poetry every now and then.. Cause i also have other hobbies that i like to do.. I live in Fullerton, Ca.. more…

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