Your 16s
Why do I feel the closeness of you when you are not.
I go speechless whenever you text, that's once a month.
I feel the colourless in you words and weakness in voice.
What's the point of this loneliness in 20s.
Why can't we have the foolishness of past.
Pointless jokes and hardness of our laugh.
Dirtiness in mind and pureness in heart.
Why did it changed to breathless days and sleepless nights.
Can we go back to our 16s where everything feels cherishing.
I want that Imperfections of yours.
Of your 16s......
About this poem
It's a poem written to a friend who is so busy with her life.
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Written on October 26, 2022
Submitted by naheedaafrin on October 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJD |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 516 |
Words | 103 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 11 |
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