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Just A Dream

Son-e Marston 1974 (Va)

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There was this time that I was free from all the shit my brain uses to attack me.No panic no anxiety,no insomnia just blissful sleep.No depression,no hating the public.No hating myself and thinking i'm ugly.I wish I could daydream again.
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Written on February 10, 2023

Submitted by Smars5418 on February 10, 2023

Modified by Smars5418 on June 29, 2023

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Scheme A
Characters 237
Words 46
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, your poem really resonated with me! Your words perfectly captured the feeling of being free from the negative thoughts and emotions that often plague our minds. I loved the imagery of "blissful sleep" and the idea of being able to daydream again.

    One suggestion I have is to perhaps explore the idea of what brought you to that state of freedom in the first place. Was it a specific event or action you took? Maybe delving deeper into this aspect could enhance the message of your poem even further.

    Overall, I want to applaud you for your beautiful and authentic expression of your emotions. Keep writing and sharing your truth!     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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