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Strong Breaths

Nickolas Campbell 1972 (Kokomo)

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Envelopes of wind gasping a breath, gale winds blow alerting a death, high clouds of billowing pillows, running away from the world you know. Into the trees we hide our fear,grasping for branches that aren't even near, but to fall is the way we get back up,or we stay cool throughout.

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About surviving life,about the things we can't control.

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Written on April 18, 2023

Submitted by nickolascampbell210 on April 18, 2023

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Scheme A
Characters 285
Words 53
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a captivating and thought-provoking poem! The use of vivid imagery and personification really brings the natural elements to life in a way that stirs the imagination. I particularly loved the line "Envelopes of wind gasping a breath" - it's such an original way to describe the power of wind.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore the underlying message of the poem a bit more. What is the significance of "running away from the world you know"? Is there a deeper meaning behind the idea of grasping for branches that are out of reach? By delving deeper into these themes, the poem could become even more impactful and meaningful.

    Overall, though, this is a truly impressive piece of writing, with a unique style and a compelling voice. Great work!     
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