Came as a shock
CAME AS A SHOCK
it blew fast and it dust slap me
It left me spinning
Seeing stars was my only features
I was breathless
My mouth was salty
Was gasping for air
Looking around for air to breath
oh It came as a shock
I felt dizzy as if I was smoking a bad vine
The room deemed reliable but my mind
To a trip
It was like a I was dying
My eyes were burning
Tears ran like tape
I felt a roar in my stomach
It came as a shock
A small cooling breeze
Open my eyes
Again
Damn just had a car accident
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About this poem
It about me getting murged from the first time every and the way I was feeling
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Written on June 28, 2010
Submitted by nokuthulapngcongo on April 22, 2024
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Scheme | ABCXXBXXA XXXCCXXA XXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 514 |
Words | 120 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 8, 4 |
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