Came as a shock



CAME AS A SHOCK
it blew fast and it dust slap me
It left me spinning
Seeing stars was my only features
I was breathless
My mouth was salty
Was gasping for air
Looking around for air to breath
oh It came as a shock

I felt dizzy as if I was smoking a bad vine
The room deemed reliable but my mind
To a trip
It was like a I was dying
My eyes were burning
Tears ran like tape
I felt a roar in my stomach
It came as a shock
  
A small cooling breeze
Open my eyes
Again
Damn just had a car accident

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It about me getting murged from the first time every and the way I was feeling

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Written on June 28, 2010

Submitted by nokuthulapngcongo on April 22, 2024

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Scheme ABCXXBXXA XXXCCXXA XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 514
Words 120
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 8, 4

Nokuthula Penelope Ngcongo

My name is Nokuthula Penelope Ngcongo but I go buy the name of poeticsoul am from South Africa in KwaZulu Natal the town of Durban am an African age 34 I started writing at the age of 10years but wasn't aware of it I love playing with words more…

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