It’s Not Fair



It’s not fair
It’s not fair It’s not fair that on your last day I wake up breathing well
It’s not fair It’s not fair that on your last day, I wake up hearing the birds singing
It’s not fair that on your last day I get to go to work.
It’s not fair that on your last day. I experience sunrise.
It’s not fair that on your last day we get to comfort each other.
It’s not fair that I distanced myself
It’s not fair that you didn’t know how much I cared.
It’s not fair that we get to move on
It’s not fair that …

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My dear friend died of cancer

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Written on April 05, 2024

Submitted by davidcook6 on April 06, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJ
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 541
Words 116
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

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