Untitled 1 (a poem or two and some haikus)



A. Bandits of joyed lives.
B. People who deal in hate.
C. thieves of peace of mind,
D. of the sorrowed kind.
E. pursive anguishes.
F. self-evident strife.
G. Bullied to no aid.

A. tenacious cynics stealing.
B. those who steal from others plates.
C. bastards smearing their presence.
D. on those too weak to walk away.
E. steadfast in the damages.
F. the self-gorging of a knife.
G. freedom finally attained.

A. hatred left behind.
B. deserves karma's snare.
C. cancerous, hurtful.
D. perpetual fear.
E. prey asphyxiates.
F. the end starts to near.
G. the lights come to kill.
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A. Bandits of joyed lives.   
A. tenacious cynics stealing.
A. hatred left behind.    
 
B. people who deal hate.  
B. those who steal from others plates.  
B. deserves karma's snare.   

C. thieves of joyed lives.                           
C. bastards smearing their presence.     
C. cancerous, hurtful.                                 

D. of the sorrowed kind.
D. on those too weak to walk away,    
D. perpetual fear.          

E. pursive anguishes.
E. steadfast in their damages.
E. pain asphyxiates.                                     

F. self-evident strife.                           
F. the self-gorging of a knife.     
F. the end starts to near.       

G. Bullied to no aid.              
G. freedom finally attained.       
G. the lights come to kill.             

About this poem

the structure of the poem is A,B,C,D,E,F,G x3. and each line of each poem combines to creates the second half of the poem. AAA, BBB, CCC etc. and each combined poem is also a haiku.

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Written on September 10, 2017

Submitted by blake.edward.mccool on May 19, 2024

Modified by blake.edward.mccool on May 19, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbcCADE FGHIjDK CLMNgNOx AFC bGL aHM CIN Ajg DDN EKO
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,396
Words 251
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 8, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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