Distance Between Lover Seem to be Forever (Poem No. 3)
Revised)
Before I lay down to sleep
I love to pray for you my Sweet.
When I close my eyes for awhile,
I see a glimpse of your smile.
Wherever you may go, whatever you may do;
I have miscall or not, I would have to deal with that.
When ever I'm feeling blue, or just lonely for you,
I must not complain..., or be suspicious on you.
Do me a favor be consistent and persistent...
Let's have mutual respect, let's be true to self.
Honesty is the best policy in every relationship.
Without it the ship of companionship will go wreck.
Truth can set us free and gain respect.
Lie is lie, just like a flies, flutter by, like a butterfly.
When I'm awake or going to sleep,
I pray for you in my secret place.
Distance between lover seem to be forever,
But through prayers make us closer ever.
Originally written in March 2012
in rough draft I should not have submitted yet.
Now this is growing up baby poem,ehehhehe
Revised 12-2012
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Submitted by ging_a on October 02, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABX CC DX DD XX XX XX BX EE XXXA |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 902 |
Words | 175 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4 |
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