Analysis of Welcome to positive broughts. ( lyrical school children poem )

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Welcome to positive brought.
Keep away from negative thought,
One by one, other than none,
Welcome...............

One must rise, in life,
With own self,
With own efforts,
By own regards,
Step by step,
Every step,
Welcome.................

From sun rise, to till,
The sun set,
Awake my self,
Prepare myself,
Day by day,
Every day,
Welcome.........

When you find, any kind,
Of danger around,
Alert myself,
Protect myself,
Sight by sight,
Every sight,
Welcome...............


Scheme aaxB xcxxddB xxcceeB xxccffB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (48%)
Metre 1011001 10111001 1111011 10 11101 111 1110 1101 111 1001 10 11111 011 0111 011 111 1001 10 111101 11001 011 011 111 1001 10
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 447
Words 73
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by brijmohan_p on May 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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