Analysis of Emptiness

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



No human can induce it
No human can imagine it
It is impossible to comprehend
It is impossible to configure

It is most simplistically…empty
Devoid of anything breathing
Devoid of any form or structure
Devoid of anything and everything

It is antigen to all things being
A maelstrom to a calm sea
It is chaos in its purity
An elemental force of destruction

You are because you exist
You breathe because air exists
You see because there is to see
You touch because it is tangible

Imagine no living being existed
Imagine there is no air
Imagine there is nothing to touch
Imagine there is no earth at all

Picture the darkness of no sun
Or stars of any kind
Picture an empty universe
Nary a single anything

Try to picture inexistence
A dark airless infinite vacuum
Then remember that vacuum is something; space
And imagine it gone too

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme AAXB CDBD DCCE XFCX XXXX EXXD FXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011 11010101 110100101 1101001010 111110 0111010 011101110 01110010 1110011110 0101011 111001100 101011010 1101101 1101101 11011111 110111100 01011010010 0101111 010111011 010111111 10010111 111101 1011010 1001010 11101 011010010 10101101101 0010111 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 819
Words 152
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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