Analysis of with you



Willingly I finally come to senses to realize my character and my emptiness.
Let's go of ours inverted dreams,
Let's go of the things which will one day fade away.
Let's go of ours leisure, desire, and pleasure.
Let's go ours suspense dreams.
If this is fate, no matter how bitter life can be, but you always contacted to me.
Yet if isn't, just bury this love in your heart.

In this life of ours, everything's interconnected and it take only a split second to look back.
Let's me plant a seed of good will and let's walk down this road of life together with you.
I have considered heaven and earth and I have considered everything from my past.
Yet I still cannot make out the days of life and death.
Yet I still trying to make me be strong, cause the happiness is not far away.
As thought are built around our desires it only take a split seconds to decide between good and bad.

Without a heart of repentance, let me walk down this road of life together with you.
No matter how long i will be with you, but as long as,
I will hold your hand and walk till the end of the world.

My unconditional heart brings to you great blessing with no boundaries.
Come let's break the boundaries of the world and fly in the sky with me.
In this world no one remember who we are.
There is only good and bad.
And don't forget that there is someone in the world who believe in you.

So let's forget all your worries and live this world openly.
Now, willingly, I finally come to my senses to realize my character and my emptiness.
In pure simplicity, let me walk down this road of life together with you.........


Scheme ABCXBDX XEXXCF EXX XDXFE DAE
Poetic Form
Metre 10011001110110110001100 111100101 111011111101 1111010010010 1110011 11111101101111111011 111011011011 011110100010011100110111 111011110111111101011 11010100101101010111 1111011011101 11110111111010011101 11110110010110101101101101 010110101111111101011 11011111111111 1111101101101 10100111111011100 11101001010100111 01111010111 1110101 0101111100110101 110111100111100 1100110011110110110001100 0101001111111101011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,571
Words 304
Sentences 22
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 3, 5, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 247
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Submitted by ar9005186 on May 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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