Analysis of Just one more time

Billie dee ryder 1979 (Kamloops BC)



I sit here alone
Thinking of you
Wondering again
If your real
I dont remember
When I saw you
When we last kissed
I just remember how it felt
Are you invisible
If your real
When will you come back
Can I see you again
I want to feel what I have felt
So many times
The warmth that u gave me
So many nights
Even if your not real
The feeling was there
That beautiful feeling of love
That feeling I pray to be true
Please come back to me
Hold me in your arms
Hold me one more time
Once again
Whisper to me
Tell me I'm yours
Tell me you wont leave
That i'll see you again
That I'll feel your touch
Upon my skin
Your lips gently
Brushing against my cheek
One more time
Come back pls
I love you


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Metre 11101 1011 10001 111 11010 1111 1111 11010111 110100 111 11111 111101 11111111 1101 011111 1101 101111 01011 11001011 11011111 11111 11011 11111 101 1011 1111 11111 111101 11111 0111 1110 100111 111 111 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 664
Words 144
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 539
Words per stanza (avg) 144
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Billie dee ryder

I am 42 from canada. I have three beautiful grown children and a grandson 4 reasons to be proud. They are kind gentle souls that I raised alone. I want them to remember to never settle for anything less then love. Although love should never be easy the reason being is you will never really appreciate easy. It should also never really hurt to love someone or to be loved people make mistakes and should be forgiven but some mistakes dont deserve a forever end. That I finally learned. more…

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