Analysis of The Innocent Prosper



My ear received a whisper,
Something secretly brought;
Sounding like a whimper,
Of what I should have sought.

Amid thoughts from visions,
A deep sleep falls at night;
Dreams having collisions,
That is bringing insight.

Fear came as I dead,
Which made my bones to shake;
While trembling in bed,
Feeling like an earthquake.

A spirit passed by me,
My hair stood up on end;
Wondered what it could be,
And what it might intend.

It stood still without form,
Unformed before my eyes;
Felt neither cold nor warm,
But to be in disguise.

It was filled with silence,
But then I heard a voice;
Mortals causing violence,
As an immoral choice.

Can man ever be pure,
Before His Creator;
His illness have a cure,
As an expiator.

He will not put His trust,
Angels charged in err;
Man enjoying his lust,
With playing truth or dare.

Your house is made of clay,
Whose foundation is dust;
Allowing you to stray,
For pursuing your lust.

Forever they perish,
Without wisdom they die;
Everything you cherish,
And you do not know why.

Copyright © 2021 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ KLKL MAMA NONO PNPN QRQR A
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 101001 101010 111111 011110 011111 110010 11101 11111 111111 110001 10111 010111 111111 101111 011101 111011 010111 110111 111001 111110 111101 1010100 110101 111011 011010 110101 111 111111 10101 101011 110111 111111 101011 010111 101011 010110 011011 10110 011111 10101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,010
Words 187
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Demonic Discouragement Job 4:12-21

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Written on July 07, 2021

Submitted by richards.77936 on July 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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