Analysis of story incomplete !!

Anushka Singh 2007 (Ranchi, Jharkhand)



Ya! it's a story! incompleted both the sides
Examined my innocence! n  lad on the other side !
some facts I didn't know and some I 'd hide!
On the path of fallacy, ya! we both did glide!

ya! We were naive,alike friends we'd behave
Hot sparks ! amid us ; did wave
We both killed each other n groan we' d gave
We became the reason of degrades !
spotted Persona!  of each other we made
Ya! we both  forged our grave!

We both were passionate for each other !
Twist came thru another lad to borther!
 I rejected !
We both break our bond !the first one
Lad wished, I should go with another one!
 I organised!

Oh! the issue flowed on!
Just the lashings blowed on!
Scars on my deeds glown
Ya! I became the clown!

Dim blow of love turned
hot loo thru evil Vibes
ya! It  district our lives
Gallent ,selfless ,caring
All trashed, turned ugly being
All turn fake in the musings!!


Scheme XAAA BBBXXB CCXDDA EEDX XXXFFX
Poetic Form
Metre 110101101 01011001110101 11110101111 101110011111 11011101 1101111 11111011111 101010101 10010111011 1111101 1101001110 111010111 1010 111101011 1111110101 11 101011 101011 11111 110101 11111 111101 1110101 11010 1111010 1110010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 846
Words 163
Sentences 26
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 6, 4, 6
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

It's a poem describing an issue of misunderstanding amid love birds ..The facts hidden and ego that stuck amid them and become their enemy ... This narrates a lovestory started with cheers and ended up in tears..

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Written on July 17, 2021

Submitted by 8519anushka on July 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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