Analysis of My Shadow Side

Bryan Kiser Jr 1989 (Benton Harbor,Michigan)



Telling the truth isn't he greatest  strength

See the light but wandering through the dark

Shadow saying change is hard

My mind knows is the right path

Love I have seen

Heart runs from it

Pain and struggle is all I know

Better times ahead

Do I wait

Procrastinating time, my flesh takes over

Mind over matter I can do

Overcame many battles

Battles that ran through my vein like new blood

We been together for decades now

I want a divorce,it begs me back

Feeling like it can't live without  me

I always go back

Consuming my heart

I fall back in love

Today it told me it loves me

The soul speaks same ole lies

Breaking people hearts just to feel secure

That is not my intention

Wild days and times we have had

Fun at the moment but loneliness  at night

Alcohol was our closest friend

Only came around when there was sorrow

chaotic mind,empty heart all it brings

Got the courage to depart

Many people struggle just like I am

This is my poem to you

Let it go you'll be okay


Scheme X X X X X X A X X X B X X X C D C E X D X X X X X X A X E X B X
Poetic Form
Metre 1001101101 1011100101 110111 1111011 1111 1111 10101111 10101 111 0100111110 11010111 1011010 1011111111 110101011 1101111 101111011 1111 01011 11101 01111111 011111 1010111101 1111010 1101111 11010110011 10110101 1010111110 01011111 1010101 1010101111 1111011 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 940
Words 188
Sentences 1
Stanzas 32
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote for those struggling with their shadow side.

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Submitted by Mysticwriter89 on August 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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