Analysis of Ascent
In the mountains ,near to the clouds ,
Where winters air whispers soft ~
Trees hang low with snow that shrouds ..
Creating a lovers loft.
Winters birds sing resounding ,
Tree limbs snap and plow ~
kiss with arms surrounding ..
Nothing matters … only now.
Glittering, frozen footprints made ,
As we venture hand in hand ~
Natures' bedding , where we laid ..
Not trying to understand.
Blue moon high over treetops shine ,
Make clear for us this dream ~
Where I am yours, and you are mine ..
Our place wherefrom we deem.
A given moment, space in time ,
To be all that we dare ~
There is no higher quest or climb ..
Than submitting to what we share.
Scheme | AXAX BCBC DEDE FGFG HIHI |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Quatrain (80%) Etheree (30%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 00101101 1101101 1111111 0100101 1011010 11101 111010 1010101 1001011 1110101 1010111 110101 1111011 111111 11110111 101111 01010101 111111 11110111 10101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 649 |
Words | 115 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 98 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
My writing is from howi feel about real love. I don’t think I have had it yet, but my heart writes about it…
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Written on 2006
Submitted by Solstice62158 on August 10, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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