Analysis of irritation

Mariska 2005 (Minnesota)



Its overwhelming
trying to control this feeling
people tell me to keep breathing
I think i´ll stick with stealing
I can hear the dogs yelping
Its irritating
I miss the hospital
It was much more calming
popping these pills arent helping
I should really stop self harming
on my left arm
I need to work on healing
my emotions are revealing
I wish I could unfeel
All of this


Scheme AAAAAABAAACAABD
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 10101110 10111110 11111110 1110110 1100 11010 111110 10111010 11101110 1111 1111110 10101010 11111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 359
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 301
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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Written on September 15, 2021

Submitted by mariskahehr on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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