Analysis of STILL

Teresa Whitney 1951 (Tacoma)



The rose within this garden,
Her pedals grow so weak,
It is like a danger warning,
Leaves her heart to weep,

The dew drops once surrounding,
Dried from winds so hot,
Now she searches endlessly,
More pain she wishes not,

The beauty within this rose,
Once so radiant, and true,
Has since turned ever sour,
Like broken hearts can do,

The rose within this garden,
Her soul remains so blue,
Whispering just your name,
This rose still loves you.


Scheme Axbx bcxc xdxd Adxd
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 0101110 010111 11101010 10111 0111010 11111 1110100 111101 0100111 1110001 1111010 110111 0101110 010111 100111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 424
Words 79
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Written on September 17, 2021

Submitted by jennybabygirl6982 on September 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Teresa Whitney

Born and raised in Washington State as well as growing up in S. California, I now reside in Mooresville N. C. for the past 20 yrs. A wife for 30 yrs before loosing my late husband, a mother of 2 son's , grandmother of 6 children & great grandmother of 2 . College educated with an AA in Drug and Alcohol Counseling. A past owner of 2 state licensed board and care homes for the elderly. I have traveled the U.S. over and settled in North Carolina. My family is here and new friends I have made over the years. I am an avid Poetry writer enjoying all styles of Poetry, looking forward to having my 1st Poem book published soon. more…

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