Analysis of Crowleigh

Ariel 1967 (California)

Ode


Perhaps we lack our purpose
Because we have moved too far away
From our natural rhythms, we center

Our time around sitting
In an unnatural space
40 hours a week, telling ourselves

That a job made up is living
While our brains are hardwired
For hunting and gathering, for

Raising the young that now we leave
With others, Surprised at how we are
Disconnected from our own lives.

I am sure our Eire would wonder
If her children have become pixie-led
by the beauratic English.

We should have stayed
with the Tuatha de Danann, climbed and hid
In the mists of Corrán Tuathail

Nor should our children
Have sailed away, seeking other lands,
Seldom to return.

Eiru calls back to us at Galway
And Mayo, her face flashing then disappearing
Against the florescent haze.


Scheme XAB CXX CDX XXX BDX DDX XXX ACX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111010 011111101 11010010110 1010110 0101001 100110001 10111110 110111 11001001 10011111 110011111 01011011 111101110 1010101101 10110 1111 10111101 0011111 111010 110110101 10101 11111110 01001101010 01011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 742
Words 134
Sentences 4
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

Won prize at 2010 Ireland Poetry Festival. Published on Literary Orphans.

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Written on March 19, 2009

Submitted by Ariel on September 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ariel

Ariel is a full-time Pacific Northwest poet, often participating at Oregon Open Mics events. She has been published in Gold Man Review, AIM, The Widow’s Handbook, and most recently in Terra Incognita, On The Platform Waiting and Free From Monsters. Ariel often collaborates in many Willamette Valley poetry/art projects and is a member of Oregon Poetry Association, Mid-Valley Poets Association, Willamette Writers and Poet. Her website is poetariel.net. more…

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