Analysis of Minuscule Window Spots



those minuscule spots of red & brown

have been on the window glass

above the sink for several years

they never really showed up until now

as I bend with my glasses frame in hand

& make an effort to strain to see them

with the end of my plastic spoon I scrape

somehow miraculously remembering when

my dear Aunt Vivian my mom Louise & I

watched as she made sauce "succo" to her

precise in-head receipt for she loved to cook
entertain laugh, smile & to make conversation

my Aunt V was a charmer a doll a pristine doer

what she decided to do had to be thought-out

& when she took it on she mastered it fully her

breads & fruitcakes were to die for & expensive

though she never charged nor made a profit but

as gifts or for the St. Joseph's table Aunt V went

all out never tiring never complaining everything

she did she did for Him to the best of her ability

we learn by example for when we see someone

in motion doing a good & virtuous act we seek

we ask & we find it within ourselves to imitate

the highest form of flattery to them to us & to God


Scheme X X X X X X X X X A XB X X A X X X X X B X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 1110101 01011101 1101011011 1111110101 111011111 1011110111 10100001001 11110011011 11111110 01010111111 011111010 1111010010101 11101111111 111111101100 110111010 11101110101 1111011010111 1110101001010 111111101100100 11101011111 0101001100111 1111101001110 01011100111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,071
Words 210
Sentences 2
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 9

About this poem

learning by example When we meet someone we admire, we study them and learn by their example, what gifts of personality & character they have to teach and impart. What a blessing to have such a person in one's family.

Font size:
 

Written on September 26, 2021

Submitted by gmtommaso on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:03 min read
1

Giovanni Maria Tommaso

American poet whose works include "As Simple, Simply Said" and "As Simple" more…

All Giovanni Maria Tommaso poems | Giovanni Maria Tommaso Books

3 fans

Discuss this Giovanni Maria Tommaso poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Minuscule Window Spots" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 20 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/110890/minuscule-window-spots>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    11
    days
    6
    hours
    32
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    AA Milne wrote: "A bear, however hard he tries..."
    A "stinks and attracts the flies"
    B "grows tubby with no exercise"
    C "has very very tired eyes"
    D "can never stop telling lies"