Analysis of Trapped Souls



Looking through the looking glass
They look, but they don't see
It fades from all
In the disconnect
For Logic had to flee

Eyes so lonely
Gave up hope
The needle brings the sting
Conscious fades
The lost are bound
The death of Hope, it brings

Slow and steady
Automatic bliss
Trapped and looking at the floor
And no one cares
No bonding forms
Checked out forevermore

By Sandy Sinn


Scheme XAXXA AXXXXX AXBXXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 111111 1111 00001 110111 1110 111 010101 101 0111 011111 1010 0101 1010101 0111 1101 111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 373
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem is in memory of my low times in my battle with addiction, and is in remembrance of anyone we've lost to drug addiction. These "trapped souls" fought hard, and their time ran out before they got to truly be souls"set free".

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Written on December 11, 2020

Submitted by sandysinn on October 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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"Trapped Soul"

Sandy Sinn is a poet and erotic fiction writer. She owns a custom erotica business, of which she began herself, and is some writer for. She is an advocate for mental health awareness and education, as she , herself, suffers from bipolar 1 disorder. She speaks openly about her struggles with her mental health , and how writing has helped. Sandy Sinn resides in Southern California with her dog, Phoebe. more…

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