Analysis of Forbidden Fruits
The small apple-like fruits from the tree
hanging there ready to eat
picking them is hard, I agree
The best are too high for you to reach
There was another reason why
you hesitated with others around
and would even seem too shy
to take one lying there on the ground
You once were forbidden to take and eat
what was not explicitly given by those
controlling your every day need
whose presence is still felt close
Three spoons of rice per day was the rate
and for those too sick and weak to produce
only one spoon went in the rubbish brews;
they even controlled the bugs that you ate
You must have taken in those days
with the deadly risks of doing so
because there were no other ways
to survive with rations that low
From the window I sometimes see
the tasty fruits you cannot resist
make you wander off to the distant tree
to take what you have strongly missed
Judged by the relaxation of your careworn face
the slowly gained confidence and trust
your fears finally fade at a steady pace
you really start to enjoy your lust
It becomes easier every day somehow
to simply ask for a favor or food
What is yours you can take by now
and signing your pay slip feels good
Phnom Penh, June 2006
Scheme | ABAX CDCD BXXX EXXE FGFG AHAH IJIJ KXKX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011011101 1011011 10111101 011111111 11010101 110011001 0110111 111101101 1101001101 11101001011 010110011 1101111 111111101 0111101101 1011100101 1100101111 11110011 101011101 01101101 10111011 10101011 010111001 1110110101 11111101 1100101111 010110001 11100110101 110110111 10110010011 1101101011 11111111 01011111 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,154 |
Words | 226 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
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