Analysis of I'm Still in Here.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I'm still in here
When you kiss me.
Still me is this soup bowl.

I'm still the one
You fell in love with.
Still me you used to hold.

I'm still here
Loving your eyes
The window of your whole.

I'm still the one
Watching over you
Very mate to your sweet soul.

I'm still here
To collect you
When completed is your goal.

I'm still the one
Dressed in wings
And nil is heavens Toll.

I'm still here
When there's no dues
My love you are my drole.

I'm still the one
To loose you
When I return back home.


Scheme axb Cxx Axb Cdb Adb Cxb Axb Cdx
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1111 111111 1101 11011 111111 111 1011 010111 1101 10101 1011111 111 1011 1010111 1101 101 011101 111 1111 111111 1101 111 110111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 470
Words 101
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

The beauty of languages lost at birth.

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Written on October 24, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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