Analysis of We Are The Burdens Of Freedom



We are the burdens of freedom!
Strung vertical in various rows in endearment
In self inflicted tendrils that are marked scarlet but no other
In bruises that abused the flesh off fother
....we best be at the hush off terrible things.....

We are the burdens of freedom!
A way to expel the mindset off shunned rituals
An immurement we're our words slithered
Hopeful the ghosts from decayed were collared to be withered!
Announced our souls! Now!
We were just weakened strings

We are the burdens of freedom!
Friendless were a braided pardon
Where one could pass along happily into blank clouds..we are in mourning
Perhaps grateful to become aborn
Into a newly passive garden

We are the burdens of freedom!
Nor when it was the weight off an early November
To a victim escorted with such beliefs
To only the sickened that was delayed relief
Frills those unopposed...we shall remember!

We are the burdens of freedom!
Money was expelled for a purpose off greed
War-strung eyes now we're ravaged and gifted
Shouting hatred as bullets for the lives you lifted
We were yet better enough to plant that last seed....

....no more laws were to decreed..
...off awful sodden wings...
.... unfortunate souls harden...
....within a handmade coffin December..
...wish we were able to plead....


Scheme Abccd Axbxxd Aexxe Acxxc Afggf fdecf
Poetic Form
Metre 11010110 1100010010010 010101111101110 0101010111 11110111001 11010110 011010111100 1111011 10011010101110 011011 101101 11010110 1001010 11110110001111010 011010101 010101010 11010110 1111011110010 10100101101 110010110101 1111010 11010110 10101101011 1111110010 1010110101110 101100111111 1110101 110101 0100110 0101110010 1101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,290
Words 245
Sentences 25
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Written on November 10, 2021

Submitted by Shell_Bell49 on November 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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