Analysis of Crushed dream



No one wants to see you grow
They just wanna see you go
The pretty soul who loved to sing
But little did she know that birds can sing
“You’re not on beat” , “ you can’t even sing “ yells the singing bird
“Go get me this “ , “ go get me that “
“And you better not express how you feel or you’ll really see how mean I can be”
As soon as I start to feel alive
The shadows and negativity be affecting my mind and it’s like when I start to shine I sense the bad energy being sent my way like a little chime and as the time flies by as I sit and reminisce of all the pain I went through,  now my thought process may seem insane , it’ll never be the same, I space away on a mind vacay then come back to reality and remember they want to keep me in this captivity they don’t want me free , to be me, the thing I cease to be …


Scheme AABBCDEFE
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 1111111 1110111 01011111 1101111111 11111110110101 11111111 01101011111110111111 111111101 010010010101101111111110110010111101010101111110011101111111111011101011101101111111000101111101010011111111011111
Characters 856
Words 180
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 68
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 614
Words per stanza (avg) 180

About this poem

A feeling of entrapment

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Written on November 19, 2021

Submitted by Justasoul on November 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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