Analysis of Rain

Ronald Allen 1985 (Pittsburgh PA)



OH Punish me oh faith you.
With your side effects that come with
dealing with you.
I been good to you.
Even listening to each of your words
appreciated every time I heard your voice.
Punish me because I’m to much of me  
beyond the limits of regularity.
Since not we in death than why are we apart.
Every second each sweat energy is counting
nothing you can get back is what we given.
OH Punish me oh faith you.
I took you in absorb blindly in you
Well Thank you for these side effects you put upon on me.


Scheme AbaacdeefghAae
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 11101111 1011 11111 1010011111 010010011111 1010111111 0101010100 11101111101 1001011100110 10111111110 1101111 1110011001 11111101110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 508
Words 110
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 394
Words per stanza (avg) 100

About this poem

A breakup.

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Written on November 20, 2021

Submitted by Surpreme on November 20, 2021

Modified on May 03, 2023

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