Analysis of https://rjjstephan.blogspot.com/
Ricardo Giuseppe D'Stephano 1951 (Cook County)
GRAMMA'S HAND, SHADOW OF SMILES & ONE-HAND CLAPPING
Points in no direction in or out the apple core, where you are, we all are
Fast as river flow from atop a mountain peak, H2O counterrevolutionary
But neither any revolution of cosmic proportions nor subatomic quarky
In or out of a charity situation influences your karma, your soul's care.
Eternal punks and mortal gods lookin' to be crucified for using bad Words
Subjects, predicating the objects in phrase, sentenced to hotrods' Fords
Never drive into the parking lot if you don't have a reason for ever being
Thumb your nose and ignore my backhand, beware of the holy warning.
Sisters, the fathers and brothers all didn't know their own mothers' milk
Dreaming of praying on knees or every move you make, it's a calling one
Never a joke, never a fluke, it's always the way it is because that's the end
Of the genome in that particular form, it's stopping the flow of a godsend.
I ain't lying, it's no joke, there's a punch line, it ain't funny, it's humorless
Listen to nobody, take your medecine son, it's an ache that plays 3D chess
Sooner or later, it's a matter of more or less time on the dirt or in the dirt
Should you see me in heaven or hell, say hello but I won't be able to flirt.
Winged angels, up or down, in or out the movement of the noted chords
Music to my ears and the gold of your power to be aware, awake & alive
Eating, drinking, recycling the matter in and out of our forms, hail Caesar!
Tzar powers will never rule any universe's solar system's dead shuck jive.
Angels above and below Chicago and Montgomery, regardless of the spin
Earth's mass wobbles and revolves around the sun like an atomic electron
But why? Who's asking? That is the point, the only important one, what?
Truth about the whole heaven and earth myth is, the dead men are mute.
Dead women would have spilled the beans on the eternal immortals' Ids
Survive a power to absorb fuel, energy consumation of heaven's stargate
Oneness of happiness in paradise or in hell, with or without the stepkids
Everyone fish is on its own, its all for One, One for allstar love, killed hate.
by
r j j stephan, i
c. Dimanche, Janvier 9th, 2022 Anno Domini @ 911 AMPST
{ Drafted while jammin' to #GrammasHands in an infinite loop by @BillWithers on youTube link @ https://youtu.be/qv5pagal-ls }
F I N I S
W.W.A.R.D.?
Scheme | AXXAX BCAA XXDD XEFF CGXG XXXX BHBH IIDEED |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111110 1010100110101111111 11101101010111000100 1101001011001010101 01110100010100110111 010101011111011011 101000100110111 101010101111101011010 1110011101101010 10010010110111101 1011011110011110101 1001100111011101101 101010100111001101 1110111101111101100 101111111111111 101101010111111011001 11110101110111111011 11011101101010101 10111001111011010101 101001000100011101110 11011011011010111 1001001010010010101 111001010111010010 11110110101001011 1010110011101111 11011101100100101 010101011010011101 101100010101110101 10111111111111111 1 111101 1110011101001 10111101100111111111111 11111 1 |
Characters | 2,354 |
Words | 447 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 52 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 228 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 54 |
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it's the whole shebang!
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Written on January 09, 2022
Submitted by rico_s on January 09, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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