Analysis of My love

Ryan M. Linn 1993 (West Virginia)



My heart pounds as my lips push against glass.
One more hit, just one more, it'll last.
My love I am torn in half. This love or our love? How could you ever ask?
I love you but this, it loves me.
I crave it, this is what I need.
If you truly loved me you'd watch it sink in its teeth.
You don't though, so should leave.
It says it loves me for me.
It says it's here to please.
I am Gollum it is my ring.
My very precious, precious thing.


Scheme ABCDEFGDHII
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111011 111111101 1111101111101111101 11111111 11111111 1110111111011 111111 1111111 111111 11101111 11010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 451
Words 105
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 322
Words per stanza (avg) 93

About this poem

You figure it out. Isn't that the point? I'd say it's kinda on the nose.

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Submitted by ryanl.26247 on January 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ryan M. Linn

29 years old. Definitely insane. Wanna be poet. I live I'm Morgantown, wv. I am alone. more…

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