Analysis of My Voice



I leave you my voice, while I go to Heaven.  Whenever you feel alone, just sit back and listen.

Close your eyes, and reminisce our times together.  Will you be alone?, no not ever.

I can't be present, you know that's a fact.  But I will never leave your side, and I'll always watch your back.

Trust in your dreams, when I am talking to you.  I'll help you understand, whatever you're going through.

My body may be absent, but my spirit will remain.  I can see everything that happens, just call upon my name.

I'll come and sit with you, nothing could keep me away.  I'll be there to console you, on any given day.

I leave you my voice, while I go to Heaven.  Whenever you feel alone, just sit back and listen.

SKPayne 9/8/21 @ 3:30 pm


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Poetic Form
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Characters 764
Words 170
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 69
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

When a loved one leaves us they never truly leave us.

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Written on September 08, 2021

Submitted on January 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sandra Kaye Mangolas

I am 56 yr old woman who lost my son 9 yrs ago poetry helps me. more…

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