Analysis of Belle of my Universe



Her voice sounded like music,
Which I heard from over the phone.
That sound that could heal the sick,
From outside towards the depth of your bones.
Voila, what a voice that gives me relief,
Relaxes me like the breeze of winds from the cliff.

Her beauty ignites fire to my cold,
With those eyes that dazzles,
Like a walking story remaining untold,
That lights up my dark, just like a candle.
And those lips that she possess,
Strikes your eyes, you'd say 'She's flawless.'

She takes you to this unknown place,
In the middle of the ocean where you meet the breeze.
When you catch her eyes, it conveys you to a pace -
It'll get you wishing that time stays like this.
To admire her, I might not be the first;
But I'll be the only who sees her as the belle of my universe.


Scheme AXABXX CBCXXX DXDXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0110110 11111001 1111101 1110101111 110111101 010110111101 0100110111 11111 10101001001 1111111010 0111101 11111110 11111011 0010101011101 111011011101 10111011111 1010111101 1110101101011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 770
Words 167
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 197
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

I have this written now for her, unfortunately she's no longer there. No, she's not dead. She just wants me away instead. Although that's how she perceives, but for me nothing will change. No one will ever be as beautiful, and no one will ever make me love the way I love her.

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Written on January 27, 2022

Submitted by crldrck on January 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Carl Derick Pimentel

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