Analysis of Dance With the Devil



Dance with the Devil

By Charlotte Wiggins

He was the kind of handsome that makes you understand why God needed a day of rest.
Impeccably dressed and he gave off an air of charm unsurpassable.

As he crossed the acres-sized ballroom, he passed dozens of some of the most beautiful women alive, unlike myself.
He approached me and very slowly and deliberately held his hand out.

In awe I was, and just as confused…without a word from either of us I took his hand and let him lead me to the middle of the room.

We stood face to face for a moment as he slowly slipped his right arm around my waist and placed his left hand in mine.

A waltz started and so very effortlessly he twirled me about the floor.
He knew every step so very well and executed each so gracefully.
it was if we were both two inches above the floor.

When the song ended, he stopped, suddenly
dipping me so low I could feel it when my curls hit the floor.
He raised me back to my feet at a pace that was magical.

We were not just face to face now, but nearly lips to lips...he kissed me ever so softly that it was hardly a kiss at all.
I felt a spark of energy…a tickle of surprise…a slight warmth throughout my everything.

Abruptly, he stepped back from me…
he thanked me for the dance and turned his back to me.
His walk away was ever so slowly that it almost hurt.

When he reached the other side of the room
he paused for what felt like a day…hauntingly so
he turned to see me as I was wistfully watching him.

In that moment I saw his eyes glow a shade of red I
could not name, and with an evil grin on his lips
he removed a piece of paper from his jacket pocket.
It had a signature at the bottom which was
eerily familiar…. aghast was I when I realized why.
It was obviously my signature….
as my eyes brought it into focus I
saw the header of the document…
It was a contract…for my soul!!!
In the middle it read; “If you want to dance,
you must pay the fiddler.”

A feeling of utter horror filled my thoughts.
I realized then that I had unwittingly danced with the devil himself.
Now I would one day pay the ultimate price for my mistake.
  


Scheme A X XA BX C X DED EDA XX EEX CXX FXXXFGFXXXG XBX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11010 11011101110111100111 01001011111111 111010111110111011001001011 1011010100010001111 0111011010101110111111011111010101 1111110101110111101110111101 0110011010001110101 1110011101010011100 1111011100101 1011011100 101111111111101 111111110111100 101111111101111110110111100111 1101110001010101101110 01011111 111101011111 11011101101111 1110101101 111111011001 11111111100101 01101111101111 111011101111 10101110111010 110100101011 100010011111101 1110001100 1111101101 101010100 1101111 00101111111 1110100 01011010111 110111101001101001 111111010011101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,151
Words 456
Sentences 27
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 11, 3
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

I tried to make it as intense and sultry as I could

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Written on January 20, 2022

Submitted on March 07, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

2:16 min read
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charlotte h wiggins

been a published poet since 1979 when I was 13. I'm an Appalachian American and very proud of it. I'm an avid hunter and fisher (fresh and salt) but the biggest animal advocate you'll meet. more…

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