Analysis of Mirrored Red

Brady Bowen 1973 (Louisiana)



Rebirth isn’t a breeze-caress
but a ripping, bloody labor of self-love
that grinds the bones of your departed self
into dust easily mixed
with the blood of yesterday.

My golden muse departs for another
more worthy of the love-gift
as the mirror is held outward-facing always
reflecting only the shortcomings of safety
for those Greek ladies carry tragedies

Hither, thither and yon until
the mirror cuts her hands again.
The blood is mine; a vermillion song
crying out in the way of Abel
until again it is hither, thither and yon.

Why does my blood cry out
from this parched ground of ignonimy?
from whence comes sweet succor?
The dogs lick my life from the dirt
and no one notices I am no more.


Scheme XXXXX AXXXX XXXXX XXAXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 0110101 10101010111 1101110101 0111001 101110 1101011010 1101011 10101110101 01010010110 1111010100 1010101 01010101 011100101 101001110 01011110101 111111 111111 111110 01111101 0111001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 713
Words 142
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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Private angelic love inspiration

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Written on March 02, 2022

Submitted by BradyB999 on March 10, 2022

Modified on April 11, 2023

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