Analysis of hummingbird

Adrienne Wilson 1957 (California)



(for Lisa Lenard-Cook)

she of the whirlwinds,

tiny thundercloud and falcon’s eye

rainbow from the painted hills

what songs you conjured forth

in the careful tending of a sea of hearts

voices breaking as they read

one tiny word after another

you darted sharply

careful catching, lest they fall, careful

tending of the timid, careful

charting of the heights and valleys

if one of them cried

you held the silence for the whole wide room

what will we do without the bright bohemian of you

the owl’s quiet cluck

a dorothy parker sigh, a shrug

and your silly jingle jangle down the halls

drinking in the room, and

smiles, serene, composed

bright desert bird bedecked

her tiny plumage penned

her sharpened courage

her pointed tongue, poised pen

little falcon of the hills

swoops now above the silent sage

whirlwind of the desert sands


Scheme X A X A X A X X X B B A X X X X X A X X X X X X A X A
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 1101 1010101 110101 111101 00101010111 1010111 110110010 11010 101011110 10101010 10101010 11111 1101010111 11110101010011 01101 010010101 01101010101 100010 10101 110101 010101 01010 010111 1010101 11010101 110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 974
Words 192
Sentences 1
Stanzas 27
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 5

About this poem

This poem was written as an elegy, for one of my writing teachers. Taken too soon, from the SB Writers Conference https://valentinebonnaire.com/2016/05/30/hummingbird-poem/ I wrote it in my old blog, as my nom de plume Valentine Bonnaire, but actually writ by me - Adrienne Wilson

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Written on May 30, 2016

Submitted by adriennedwilsonwriter on March 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Adrienne Wilson

I have been published for my writing in the web since 2001, as my noms de plume Adrianna de la Rosa, at Cleansheets and as Valentine or Valentina Bonnaire at ERWA. Currently very happy to have found all of you. My short stories have been picked up in two books. For many years I attended the SB Writers Conference and studied screenwriting. more…

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