Analysis of Hunger

Gigi 2003 (Tennessee)



My home is falling apart.

The walls are collecting as much debris as possible

I put no effort into rebuilding or supplying for my house,

And the pain I feel

Rewards me still.

I’ll keep going, too.

My place of residence crashes

Until there’s nothing left

But the framing and floors.

But the emptiness fills me

And the attention fuels me.

I’ve seen others,

Whose shells have withered away

And leave them subservient

To the aches of the world.

But these skulls validate me

And their bones thrill me.

Until my home is too far away to save,

And I’m left to waste away with the walls

Of what used to be

The most precious thing to me.


Scheme X X X X X X X X X A A X X X X A A X X A A
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001 01101011011100 11110010101010111 00111 0111 11101 11110010 011101 101001 1010011 00010101 1110 1111001 0110100 101101 1111001 01111 01111110111 0111101101 11111 0110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 675
Words 152
Sentences 9
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

Descending appetite, comfort, and familiarity with one's own body.

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Written on August 04, 2021

Submitted by hgigijunkmail on April 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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