Analysis of I Could Rant Forever



We don't deserve
Anything good,
For we are
A wicked mess of horrible
Capabilities.
Just look at us,
The terrible beings we are,
And just look at all
We say and do.
We kill our people,
Our own kind.
We kill innocent creatures
Just for entertainment
Of some sort.
We kill our world
And we will be
The very center
Of the destruction
Of our world.
We harm each other
In ways so unimaginably awful;
Why would we
Want to do this?
Why is violence
And sin
And evil
Such a regular part
Of our lives?
But I know why.
We want our hurt
And pain
And suffering
To be shared,
So we just dump
All our problems
On some poor,
Innocent being,
Hoping it'll solve
Everything,
But it doesn't.
We are evil things,
We don't deserve
Anything but death
And torment,
For we are horrible creatures,
And we will not
And should not survive.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101 101 111 01011100 0100 1111 01001011 01111 1101 111010 1011 1110010 11010 111 11101 0111 01010 10010 1101 11110 011110 111 1111 11100 01 010 101001 1101 1111 11101 01 0100 111 1111 11010 111 10010 10101 10 1110 11101 1101 1011 01 11110010 0111 01101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 825
Words 190
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 47
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 630
Words per stanza (avg) 155

About this poem

There's a lot of times when I've felt disgusted with the world, and I wrote this a while back during one of those times. I wrote it in all caps because I was so angry.

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Submitted by lonely-blue-sheep on April 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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