Analysis of Fifty-Five

Gerald Ray 1943 (Providence, Ky.)



I never thought at twenty,
I'd live to be fifty-five
But time swiftly swept away the days
No wiser, than I was back then, yet I am alive
My hair is gray, my legs are weak,
And a horse is hard to mount
But banks, McDonald's and others
Offer me a small discount
I am a more caring person
My heart is filled with love
I get where I'm going, but late when I arrive
Still I find it awesome
I'm here at fifty-five
The dogs and I everyday, go
For a three hour stroll
That helps me accept completely
Things I can't control


Scheme ABCBDEFEGHBIBJKAK
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 1111101 111010101 1101111111101 11111111 0011111 11010010 1010101 11011010 111111 111110111101 111110 111101 01011011 101101 11101010 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 530
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 396
Words per stanza (avg) 104

About this poem

This poem was inspired by life.

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Written on March 28, 1998

Submitted by kevcoray on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Gerald Ray

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