Analysis of Without Judgements To Pass



A life that is lived being thankful.
And feeling this gift is a blessing.
With this to do remaining positive.
As best as one can.
Is to know those ups and downs,
Are not always around.
Since adjusting to changes,
Come to all of us to be found.

And yet with daily prayer and kept faith,
Done to recognize...
There will be obstacles to face.
To come from nowhere to anticipate.
Although prepared with faith,
If we choose to refuse doubt and negativity.
From our minds to remove,
Doubt and negativity as a choice to choose.
With this to realize,
No one lives each day without...
Something bitter to taste.
Heard to come out from their mouth.
To forgive it to remember,
All of us blessed with life to get given...
Are human beings created.
Reflecting our Creator.

'I don't know why or for what reason,
Sometimes I feel wicked and evil.
And other times,
I feel as if I am an angel with wings.
Wanting to hug and kiss my enemies.'

'And your point to make is what?'

'So tired I am of all that funky stuff.'

'I heard that.
And ridiculous it is,
Are those judgements we pass...
on each other as well.'

'I didn't say anything,
About my stopping judgements to pass.
That talent God gave me to keep.
And living without that ability to perform?
Would be a wasting of a skill.
I'm sure would not please God at all.
If I chose to leave this talent ignored.'

'Well...
Think about it.
Is living to pass judgement on others,
A reflection of God?
That's a hypocritical way of life to live.'

'Sure.
Go ahead and blame me for skills I have.
You wish you had and maybe more.
There is no need to be envious.
Or jealous of this talent.
Did you not say to me,
We are a reflection of our Creator?'

'Yeah, I said that.
But that does not mean,
Being hypocritical!'

'Oh?
So now you are trying to convince me,
You are a halo wearer...
Trumpet playing cloud walking angel?'

'Not at all.
Sometimes I too don't feel my best.
But I try not to pass judgement on others.'

'Good for you.
However...
Some of us were born with natural abilities.
Without trying to avoid,
Our God given talents and gifts.'

'You just want to argue.'

'AM I not,
A human being?
Make up your mind.
Today I feel I can have it both ways.
Is that okay?
Geeessshhh!
Afterall...
I had nothing to do,
With the creating of all this...
Here today to stay tomorrow confusion!'


Scheme ABXXCDXD EFXXEGXXFXXXHIXH IAXXJ X X KXLM BLXXXNX MXOXX XXXXXGH KXA XGHA NXO PHJXX P XBXXXCXPXI
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Tetractys  (21%)
Metre 011111010 010111010 1111010100 11111 1111101 11101 1010110 11111111 011101011 1110 11110011 11111010 10111 111101100100 1101101 10010010111 11110 1111101 101011 1111111 10111010 1111111110 11010010 01010010 111111110 011110010 0101 11111111011 1011011100 0111111 11011111101 111 0010011 111011 111011 110110 011101011 11011111 0100110100101 11010101 11111111 1111111001 1 1011 1101110110 001011 10010011111 1 1010111111 11110101 111111100 1101110 111111 110010110010 1111 11111 100100 1 1111101011 1101010 101011010 111 01111111 11111110110 111 10 1110111000100 0110101 101101001 111110 111 01010 1111 0111111111 111 1 10 111011 10010111 1011101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,320
Words 528
Sentences 63
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 8, 16, 5, 1, 1, 4, 7, 5, 7, 3, 4, 3, 5, 1, 10
Lines Amount 80
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by lpahtillah on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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